if i could ask this author one question, it would be this: why are all of the men in your story incompetent fools who make frequent mistakes and whose salvation comes only at the hands of fate, while your women are skilled and murderous and able to enact their desires instantly and easily?
@jellyfish_link Okay, but this also sounds like the kind of fic I'd expect you to write if you just went for guilty pleasure and weren't a stickler for the overall layout of the thing.
@aschmitz ah, well, it makes a big difference from whose perspective the story is told